1. Kingston and PR should be made flat and simply say "Port Royal" with "Kingston" underneath.
Spoiler
- The territory names would no longer be touching the London hat
- There is no need for the "PR" as part of the territory name since the inset says "Port Royal," which is what you would be looking for. I don't think that we need clarification that the "PR" in "PR Docks" stands for "Port Royal" since it does not cause any confusion in gameplay
This is the part where I am probably getting kind of nitpicky about some stuff, feel free to take care of some larger issues that come up in the meantime and revisit when this gets to FF
2. The lines connecting "The Church" and "Port Royal" territory names to the territories seem almost like a temporary fix. Perhaps make them thinner or reduce the opacity.
3. The Swords on either side of the legend fade out nicely in the size aspect, but have you considered using color gradient to fade them out as well?
4. Move "XML dolomite13" to the right.
5. Move your butterfly down a few pixels.




