oaktown wrote:alright, for the last time clean up your grammar and I may give this my stamp.
• are you going to capitalize "Landing Point" or aren't you? you have "Landing Points" and "landing points" and even "landing Points" !!!! • "bombard any other territory within their colony" - elsewhere you call it an empire, so I'd change colony to empire. • "Only ports on the same ocean" etc... drop "only." Because neighboring territories can attack them as well.
I wasn't in british schools long enough to remember much of anything.
anyway, the first word is just a continuous sound for like three seconds. kinda like the end of boo. so imagine saying booo without the b at the started.
I'm sure Oaktown has some experience with this though.
AndyDufresne wrote:As Gimil is the Graphics C.A., I figured I would stamp this for him, as the Graphics look more than sufficient enough for the Stamp.
---The New World Map has reached the ‘Final Forge’ Stage. I've revived this thread from the pits of the Foundry Furnace (okay, maybe not) and have examined the contents. Nearly every major concern has been addressed. If there are any other current concerns, please make your voice heard. If after a reasonable amount of time there has not been any objection or protest, the map will be deemed finished with the 'Foundry Brand' of approval and will be submitted for live play. As long as there is still discussion or posts that have yet to be commented on, the map will remain in Final Forge until said discussion has reached the conclusion that the map has reached its final and polished version.
Post questions and concerns if any.
--Andy
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---The New World Map has reached the ‘Final Forge’ Stage. I've revived this thread from the pits of the Foundry Furnace (okay, maybe not) and have examined the contents. Nearly every major concern has been addressed. If there are any other current concerns, please make your voice heard. If after a reasonable amount of time there has not been any objection or protest, the map will be deemed finished with the 'Foundry Brand' of approval and will be submitted for live play. As long as there is still discussion or posts that have yet to be commented on, the map will remain in Final Forge until said discussion has reached the conclusion that the map has reached its final and polished version.
---The New World Map has reached the ‘Final Forge’ Stage. I've revived this thread from the pits of the Foundry Furnace (okay, maybe not) and have examined the contents. Nearly every major concern has been addressed. If there are any other current concerns, please make your voice heard. If after a reasonable amount of time there has not been any objection or protest, the map will be deemed finished with the 'Foundry Brand' of approval and will be submitted for live play. As long as there is still discussion or posts that have yet to be commented on, the map will remain in Final Forge until said discussion has reached the conclusion that the map has reached its final and polished version.
---The New World Map has reached the ‘Final Forge’ Stage. I've revived this thread from the pits of the Foundry Furnace (okay, maybe not) and have examined the contents. Nearly every major concern has been addressed. If there are any other current concerns, please make your voice heard. If after a reasonable amount of time there has not been any objection or protest, the map will be deemed finished with the 'Foundry Brand' of approval and will be submitted for live play. As long as there is still discussion or posts that have yet to be commented on, the map will remain in Final Forge until said discussion has reached the conclusion that the map has reached its final and polished version.
Post questions and concerns if any.
--Andy
This, I believe, belongs on Mine and mibi's map.
muahahahhahahaha
“In the beginning God said, the four-dimensional divergence of an antisymmetric, second rank tensor equals zero, and there was light, and it was good. And on the seventh day he rested.”- Michio Kaku
evil monkey abusing mod powers to edit without trace
“In the beginning God said, the four-dimensional divergence of an antisymmetric, second rank tensor equals zero, and there was light, and it was good. And on the seventh day he rested.”- Michio Kaku
evil monkey abusing mod powers to edit without trace
What are you talking about
andy wrote Arms race instead of new world and now he edited.
“In the beginning God said, the four-dimensional divergence of an antisymmetric, second rank tensor equals zero, and there was light, and it was good. And on the seventh day he rested.”- Michio Kaku
qwert wrote:Do i see good,these map is start 2 januar 2008,and after 36 days in development reach Final Forge
so what? aor: magic got quenched in 2 weeks
“In the beginning God said, the four-dimensional divergence of an antisymmetric, second rank tensor equals zero, and there was light, and it was good. And on the seventh day he rested.”- Michio Kaku
