Golfe Du St. Laurent

[AndyDufresne]

I'm excited to see this map finished. It might become part of my map rotation.


--Andy

[Orange-Idaho-Dog]

Do these changes still need made, or not? I mentioned them back on page 2, I'm not sure if they were just overlooked or meant to stay the way they are.

Name fixes:

Avalon Penincula -> Avalon Peninsula
Grand Falls Winsor -> Grand Falls Windsor (GF-Windsor, on original map)

[ender516]

It looks like the d made it onto the images in the first post, but "Peninsula" still needs a fix. I'd check the XML, but ripway is blocked here at work.

[Tisha]

I've fixed it all, yes

[Tisha]

I think it's all correct.

[bigimg]http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c282/Tisha1276/GolfeLarge-5.jpg[/bigimg]


http://h1.ripway.com/Tisha1276/Golfe.xml

[ender516]

Those look good. You should update the first post with those images.

It seems to me you are ready for the official XML check, but I don't recall the protocol. Do you submit when you feel ready, or do you wait for the Final Forge moderator(s) to invite you to do so?

[Tisha]

Those look good. You should update the first post with those images.

It seems to me you are ready for the official XML check, but I don't recall the protocol. Do you submit when you feel ready, or do you wait for the Final Forge moderator(s) to invite you to do so?

forgot about that, thanks. (:

[Orange-Idaho-Dog]

All looks well to me, pending XML approval, I think it's beta time

[rdsrds2120]

All looks well to me, pending XML approval, I think it's beta time

Yes! Let's get this map started! Good work, Tisha!

-rd

[gimil]

Beautiful Tisha.

I remember when this map first came around. It is nice to see someone actually take it and get it to a point where it is ready to play.

Well done.

[AndyDufresne]

Beautiful Tisha.

I remember when this map first came around. It is nice to see someone actually take it and get it to a point where it is ready to play.

Well done.

Agreement.


--Andy

[Tisha]

[iancanton]

just a few notes on spelling and punctuation for both the images and the xml.

although Saint is often abbreviated in english-language place names, Saint John is always written in full to help to distinguish it from the newfoundland city of St John's.

http://www.saintjohn.ca/en/home/default.aspx

PEI is conventionally spelled without dots. the same rule is commonly used for all canadian province abbreviations.

http://www.gov.pe.ca/

the du in the title, Golfe du Saint-Laurent, ought to be in lower case only. it means of the, which is usually capitalised in neither english nor french. similarly with Est du Québec and Sud du Québec.

http://www.glf.dfo-mpo.gc.ca/f0006090

the above apart, u've done a splendid job with the graphics!

ian.

[Tisha]

just a few notes on spelling and punctuation for both the images and the xml.

although Saint is often abbreviated in english-language place names, Saint John is always written in full to help to distinguish it from the newfoundland city of St John's.

http://www.saintjohn.ca/en/home/default.aspx

PEI is conventionally spelled without dots. the same rule is commonly used for all canadian province abbreviations.

http://www.gov.pe.ca/

the du in the title, Golfe du Saint-Laurent, ought to be in lower case only. it means of the, which is usually capitalised in neither english nor french. similarly with Est du Québec and Sud du Québec.

http://www.glf.dfo-mpo.gc.ca/f0006090

the above apart, u've done a splendid job with the graphics!

ian.

a little late on those, but alright.

lowercase Du in the title doesn't look as great.

[iancanton]

if the title looks a bit lopsided with a lower-case du, then keep the upper-case D in the title. because of its visual function, the title is one place where the artist always has some extra latitude.

ian.

[thenobodies80]

The map looks great, the only thing I'd like to suggest is to find a way to increase readability of few names. To be precise Anticosti, Bas St. Laurent, St. john and Grand Falls Windsor.

[edit] Also Chaudière looks weird on both versions, no way to have all the text on a single line?

[thenobodies80]

The xml is ok.

[Bruceswar]

I cannot wait for this map to come out. Well done!

[AndyDufresne]

Indeed, this looks like one I'd add to my list of play.


--Andy

[Industrial Helix]

Dying to play this one as well.

[notyou2]

I've travelled most of it. I want to see if the scenery is as good as the real thing.

Bring out the beta please.

[Tisha]

fixed a few things I think, yes?



[bigimg]http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c282/Tisha1276/GolfeLarge-6.jpg[/bigimg]

http://h1.ripway.com/Tisha1276/Golfe.xml

[rdsrds2120]

On the large version, Grand Falls Windsor looks a little crooked. Can't wait! (:

-rd

[Tisha]

On the large version, Grand Falls Windsor looks a little crooked. Can't wait! (:

-rd

Better?
[bigimg]http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c282/Tisha1276/GolfeLarge-7.jpg[/bigimg]

[rdsrds2120]

yeah , or at least I think so.

-rd