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Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 12:19 pm
by Kaplowitz
TaCktiX wrote:- Ignore gimil, I think the sphinx looks just fine.
*gasp!*
But seriously, i like it much more now with 65% (or whatever it is). The other was too dark.
Maybe to compromise you can change the color of the shadow, to like a brownish color or something.
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 3:20 pm
by cairnswk
Kaplowitz wrote:TaCktiX wrote:- Ignore gimil, I think the sphinx looks just fine.
*gasp!*
But seriously, i like it much more now with 65% (or whatever it is). The other was too dark.
Maybe to compromise you can change the color of the shadow, to like a brownish color or something.
In order to do so, i am wanting to understand what is incorrect with it as it stands now.

Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 4:01 am
by cairnswk
Where's that Gimil chap? Graphics stamp, perhaps??
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 2:56 pm
by yeti_c
Agree - this looks like it's ready for the Forge...
C.
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 8:13 pm
by gimil
*Waddles in late*
The only thing that is bothering me is the fact that the pillars seem to stand out to much compared to the play area. But I also cant think of a reasonable way to fix this so im not going to hold it back.

Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 10:48 pm
by hulmey
gimil wrote:*Waddles in late*
The only thing that is bothering me is the fact that the pillars seem to stand out to much compared to the play area. But I also cant think of a reasonable way to fix this so im not going to hold it back.

looking good cairns...i think the pillars look fantastic and give it a realy nice 3 D look. It would be nice to have a statue on the other pillar but i dont think this is possible.
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 10:52 pm
by mibi
love that ocean color, nice work.
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 3:11 am
by yeti_c
Small concern - but feel free to ignore - the 2 pillars are of different height...
C.
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 4:18 am
by cairnswk
gimil wrote:*Waddles in late*
The only thing that is bothering me is the fact that the pillars seem to stand out to much compared to the play area. But I also cant think of a reasonable way to fix this so im not going to hold it back.

Thanks Gimil.
mibi wrote:love that ocean color, nice work.
Choice mibi..pleased you like!
yeti_c wrote:Small concern - but feel free to ignore - the 2 pillars are of different height...
C.
Yes C....deliberate because of the title. If it's a great prob, i can change, but i don't think it is.
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 10:47 am
by t-o-m
mibi wrote:love that ocean color, nice work.
QFT
the islands above Kha and on the right to a terit begining with "S" (forgot it's name) anyway those little islands dont fit in with the map, the map is beveled and has some kind of filter on and those islands do not.
p.s. those islands arent actual terits
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP,Gr] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 10:52 am
by Kaplowitz
Im really trying to nit-pic here, but where the river enters the ocean near Ament and A-ment it looks like really weird on the large map.
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP,Gr] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 12:39 pm
by t-o-m
Kaplowitz wrote:Im really trying to nit-pic here,
i thought that Upper Egypt (at the bottom) were terits!
maybe make it clearer that theyre not terits?
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP,Gr] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 12:46 pm
by Kaplowitz
t-o-m wrote:Kaplowitz wrote:Im really trying to nit-pic here,
i thought that Upper Egypt (at the bottom) were terits!
maybe make it clearer that theyre not terits?
I think they're fine now that he made them transparent, they have no army circles and they are not in the key.
Forge this

Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP,Gr] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 3:32 pm
by cairnswk
Kaplowitz wrote:Im really trying to nit-pic here, but where the river enters the ocean near Ament and A-ment it looks like really weird on the large map.
That's because the large map is an enlarged version of the small. When i split the maps, i will fix issues like that.
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP,Gr] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Sat May 24, 2008 3:47 pm
by cairnswk
Dows made slightly larger to keep in tune with dow size in upper egypt.

Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13) [I,GP,Gr] - Sml/Lge/Xml
Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 8:49 pm
by AndyDufresne
---
The Lower Egypt Map has reached the
‘Final Forge’ Stage. I've revived this thread from the pits of the Foundry Furnace (okay, maybe not) and have examined the contents. Nearly every major concern has been addressed. If there are any other current concerns, please make your voice heard. If after a reasonable amount of time there has not been any objection or protest, the map will be deemed finished with the 'Foundry Brand' of approval and will be submitted for live play. As long as there is still discussion or posts that have yet to be commented on, the map will remain in
Final Forge until said discussion has reached the conclusion that the map has reached its final and polished version.
Post questions and concerns if any.--Andy
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13)- Sml/Lge/Xml [Final Forge]
Posted: Tue May 27, 2008 3:33 am
by cairnswk
Thanks Andy.

Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13)- Sml/Lge/Xml [Final Forge]
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 2:34 pm
by AndyDufresne
Topic isn't so active now, so it must be getting close.

The only thing I'd suggest is perhaps reworking where the Nile flows into the Sea...the color change in some areas looks odd (near Sema. and a few other places).
Also, whenever, lets see the XML.
--Andy
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13)- Sml/Lge/Xml [Final Forge]
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 3:22 pm
by cairnswk
I'm currently working on centering, but below is xml for checking.
[bigimg]http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s282/cairnswk/lower%20egypt/lower_egypt_v19S.jpg[/bigimg]
[bigimg]http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s282/cairnswk/lower%20egypt/lower_egypt_v19L.jpg[/bigimg]
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<?xml version="1.0" ?>
<map>
<title>Lower Egypt</title>
<smallwidth>580</smallwidth>
<smallheight>505</smallheight>
<largewidth>750</largewidth>
<largeheight>653</largeheight>
<filetype>jpg</filetype>
<continent>
<name>Imu</name>
<bonus>2</bonus>
<components>
<territory>Ament</territory>
<territory>A-ment</territory>
<territory>Sapi-Res</territory>
</components>
</continent>
<continent>
<name>Khasu</name>
<bonus>2</bonus>
<components>
<territory>Sap-Meh</territory>
<territory>Khaset</territory>
<territory>Theb-ka</territory>
<territory>Ati</territory>
</components>
</continent>
<continent>
<name>Djedet</name>
<bonus>2</bonus>
<components>
<territory>Semabehdet</territory>
<territory>Tetuh</territory>
<territory>Kha</territory>
<territory>Ka-henseb</territory>
<territory>Am-Khent</territory>
</components>
</continent>
<continent>
<name>Tjaris</name>
<bonus>2</bonus>
<components>
<territory>Am-Pehu</territory>
<territory>Sopdu</territory>
<territory>A-bt</territory>
<territory>Khent-abt</territory>
</components>
</continent>
<continent>
<name>Men_Nfer</name>
<bonus>3</bonus>
<components>
<territory>Khensu</territory>
<territory>Ka-khem</territory>
<territory>Aneb-Hetch</territory>
<territory>Heq-at</territory>
</components>
</continent>
<!-- Start Imu -->
<territory>
<name>Ament</name>
<borders>
<border>A-ment</border>
<border>Sapi-Res</border>
<border>Khensu</border>
<border>Am-Pehu</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>123</smallx>
<smally>169</smally>
<largex>160</largex>
<largey>212</largey>
</coordinates>
<bonus>1</bonus>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>A-ment</name>
<borders>
<border>Sap-Meh</border>
<border>Ament</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>180</smallx>
<smally>145</smally>
<largex>234</largex>
<largey>181</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Sapi-Res</name>
<borders>
<border>Ament</border>
<border>Ati</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>264</smallx>
<smally>308</smally>
<largex>343</largex>
<largey>392</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<!-- End Imu -->
<!-- Start Khasu -->
<territory>
<name>Sap-Meh</name>
<borders>
<border>Khaset</border>
<border>A-ment</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>215</smallx>
<smally>127</smally>
<largex>279</largex>
<largey>158</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Khaset</name>
<borders>
<border>Sap-Meh</border>
<border>Theb-ka</border>
<border>Ati</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>273</smallx>
<smally>152</smally>
<largex>354</largex>
<largey>190</largey>
</coordinates>
<bonus>1</bonus>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Theb-ka</name>
<borders>
<border>Khaset</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>320</smallx>
<smally>106</smally>
<largex>415</largex>
<largey>131</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Ati</name>
<borders>
<border>Khaset</border>
<border>Tetuh</border>
<border>Sapi-Res</border>
<border>Ka-khem</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>291</smallx>
<smally>256</smally>
<largex>377</largex>
<largey>325</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<!-- End Khasu -->
<!-- Start Djedet -->
<territory>
<name>Semabehdet</name>
<borders>
<border>Tetuh</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>374</smallx>
<smally>90</smally>
<largex>485</largex>
<largey>110</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Tetuh</name>
<borders>
<border>Semabehdet</border>
<border>Kha</border>
<border>Ati</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>335</smallx>
<smally>178</smally>
<largex>434</largex>
<largey>224</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Kha</name>
<borders>
<border>Tetuh</border>
<border>Am-Khent</border>
<border>Ka-henseb</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>382</smallx>
<smally>168</smally>
<largex>495</largex>
<largey>211</largey>
</coordinates>
<bonus>1</bonus>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Ka-henseb</name>
<borders>
<border>Kha</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>359</smallx>
<smally>214</smally>
<largex>465</largex>
<largey>270</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Am-Khent</name>
<borders>
<border>Kha</border>
<border>Ka-khem</border>
<border>Sopdu</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>359</smallx>
<smally>268</smally>
<largex>465</largex>
<largey>340</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<!-- End Djedet -->
<!-- Start Tjaru -->
<territory>
<name>Am-Pehu</name>
<borders>
<border>Khent-abt</border>
<border>Ament</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>461</smallx>
<smally>166</smally>
<largex>597</largex>
<largey>208</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Khent-abt</name>
<borders>
<border>Am-Pehu</border>
<border>A-bt</border>
<border>Sopdu</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>460</smallx>
<smally>214</smally>
<largex>596</largex>
<largey>270</largey>
</coordinates>
<bonus>1</bonus>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>A-bt</name>
<borders>
<border>Khent-abt</border>
<border>Sopdu</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>536</smallx>
<smally>267</smally>
<largex>694</largex>
<largey>339</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Sopdu</name>
<borders>
<border>Khent-abt</border>
<border>A-bt</border>
<border>Am-Khent</border>
<border>Heq-at</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>431</smallx>
<smally>242</smally>
<largex>559</largex>
<largey>306</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<!-- End Tjaru -->
<!-- Start Men_Nfer -->
<territory>
<name>Khensu</name>
<borders>
<border>Ament</border>
<border>Ka-khem</border>
<border>Aneb-Hetch</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>242</smallx>
<smally>364</smally>
<largex>314</largex>
<largey>464</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Aneb-Hetch</name>
<borders>
<border>Khensu</border>
<border>Heq-at</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>274</smallx>
<smally>455</smally>
<largex>355</largex>
<largey>582</largey>
</coordinates>
<bonus>1</bonus>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Ka-khem</name>
<borders>
<border>Khensu</border>
<border>Ati</border>
<border>Am-Khent</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>319</smallx>
<smally>294</smally>
<largex>414</largex>
<largey>374</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<territory>
<name>Heq-at</name>
<borders>
<border>Aneb-Hetch</border>
<border>Sopdu</border>
</borders>
<coordinates>
<smallx>352</smallx>
<smally>400</smally>
<largex>456</largex>
<largey>511</largey>
</coordinates>
</territory>
<!-- End Men-Nfer -->
</map>
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13)- Sml/Lge/Xml [Final Forge]
Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 1:36 pm
by cairnswk
AndyDufresne wrote:Topic isn't so active now, so it must be getting close.

The only thing I'd suggest is perhaps reworking where the Nile flows into the Sea...the color change in some areas looks odd (near Sema. and a few other places).
Also, whenever, lets see the XML.
--Andy
Done Andy, thanks.
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p13)- Sml/Lge/Xml [Final Forge]
Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 2:28 am
by cairnswk
Small[bigimg]http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s282/cairnswk/lower%20egypt/lower_egypt_v19S.jpg[/bigimg]
Small with 2 digits[bigimg]http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s282/cairnswk/lower%20egypt/lower_egypt_v19ST.jpg[/bigimg]
Small with 3 ddigits[bigimg]http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s282/cairnswk/lower%20egypt/lower_egypt_v19ST3.jpg[/bigimg]
Large[bigimg]http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s282/cairnswk/lower%20egypt/lower_egypt_v19L.jpg[/bigimg]
Large with 2 digits[bigimg]http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s282/cairnswk/lower%20egypt/lower_egypt_v19LT.jpg[/bigimg]
Large with 3 digits[bigimg]http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s282/cairnswk/lower%20egypt/lower_egypt_v19LT3.jpg[/bigimg]
XML:http://h1.ripway.com/cairnswk/_lower_egypt.xml
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p15)- Sml/Lge/Xml [Final Forge]
Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 9:32 pm
by TaCktiX
QUENCH IT! Wow, I actually just typed in all caps...
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p15)- Sml/Lge/Xml [Final Forge]
Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 2:23 am
by gimil
I don't know if your still centering but the small has a few coordinates still off.
Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p15)- Sml/Lge/Xml [Final Forge]
Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 3:26 am
by cairnswk
gimil wrote:I don't know if your still centering but the small has a few coordinates still off.
Sorry Gimil...i forgot to upload the adjusted one. F5 please for maps above.

Re: LOWER EGYPT V19 (p15)- Sml/Lge/Xml [Final Forge]
Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 1:07 pm
by AndyDufresne

Thanks Forza!
--Andy