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Please help me with writing essays. I have no idea.
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DoomYoshi wrote:Please help me with writing essays. I have no idea.


I delete six or seven essay writing spam links every week. You could ask for your mod status back, and then you could investigate them all before deleting them. :)
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Dukasaur wrote:
DoomYoshi wrote:Please help me with writing essays. I have no idea.


I delete six or seven essay writing spam links every week. You could ask for your mod status back, and then you could investigate them all before deleting them. :)


Or, ya know, you could point him in a helpful direction. I'll just PM them.
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Symmetry wrote:
Dukasaur wrote:
DoomYoshi wrote:Please help me with writing essays. I have no idea.


I delete six or seven essay writing spam links every week. You could ask for your mod status back, and then you could investigate them all before deleting them. :)


Or, ya know, you could point him in a helpful direction. I'll just PM them.


Pretty bad when you can't recognise Sarcasm 101.
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the essay format is pretty rigid, it really sucks..

kind of like the format of the OP here..

you basically search for some sensationalist article and then come to CC, in the Subject you just copy the title of the article, in the body you post the url to the article and the first paragraph.



and then you think you're having conversations with other people.
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nietzsche wrote:the essay format is pretty rigid, it really sucks..

kind of like the format of the OP here..

you basically search for some sensationalist article and then come to CC, in the Subject you just copy the title of the article, in the body you post the url to the article and the first paragraph.



and then you think you're having conversations with other people.


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nietzsche wrote:the essay format is pretty rigid, it really sucks..

kind of like the format of the OP here..

you basically search for some sensationalist article and then come to CC, in the Subject you just copy the title of the article, in the body you post the url to the article and the first paragraph.



and then you think you're having conversations with other people.


Cristiano Ronaldo’s lawyers have said for the first time that the footballer did pay a woman who accused him of rape €375,000 to settle the allegations made in 2009.


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I want to say that an essay is a type of task from a teacher that does not allow borrowing from books, Internet sources, periodicals, etc. Only personal quotes are allowed, and then in very small amounts. Because of these conditions, small work (3-5 pages of printed text) often causes students no fewer difficulties than a term paper or a graduation thesis. I faced the problem of writing an essay when I went to college. At first, I tried to write to them myself, but there was simply no strength left. Mod edit (dk): spam link removed.
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Thanks for the recommendation, hooeils. Have you submitted an essay from Study Moose before? How was it graded? Look forward to discussing this in more detail with you!
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mrswdk wrote:Thanks for the recommendation, hooeils. Have you submitted an essay from Study Moose before? How was it graded? Look forward to discussing this in more detail with you!


An example of hoenails' brilliant essay work:
Subject: cure for rising ocean levels

hooeils wrote:1) Cost, which are very expensive and can be prohibitive, especially for poor countries.
2) Environmental impact (will lots of fish or marine life die?). The "left" will fight this idea based on this one aspect.
3) Other ways, including better conservation of water already available, are better.
4) And here is the "kicker" the one I did NOT research: will this idea reverse or even significantly impact rising sea levels? I did not investigate this question and I doubt NP even considered the issue.


I'm not the last word on the subject, but I would have put a dash after "kicker".
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riskllama wrote:*hyphen

Wrong.

Hyphens are used to join multiple words into single term. For example, "counter-terrorism". Dashes are used to join separate elements of a sentence in a case where a period would be too strong and a comma would be too weak.

https://www.ef.com/ca/english-resources/english-grammar/hyphens-and-dashes/

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Dukasaur wrote:
mrswdk wrote:Thanks for the recommendation, hooeils. Have you submitted an essay from Study Moose before? How was it graded? Look forward to discussing this in more detail with you!


An example of hoenails' brilliant essay work:
Subject: cure for rising ocean levels

hooeils wrote:1) Cost, which are very expensive and can be prohibitive, especially for poor countries.
2) Environmental impact (will lots of fish or marine life die?). The "left" will fight this idea based on this one aspect.
3) Other ways, including better conservation of water already available, are better.
4) And here is the "kicker" the one I did NOT research: will this idea reverse or even significantly impact rising sea levels? I did not investigate this question and I doubt NP even considered the issue.


I'm not the last word on the subject, but I would have put a dash after "kicker".


I like that it worked out to refer to him as 'NP'.
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Dukasaur wrote:
Symmetry wrote:
Dukasaur wrote:
DoomYoshi wrote:Please help me with writing essays. I have no idea.


I delete six or seven essay writing spam links every week. You could ask for your mod status back, and then you could investigate them all before deleting them. :)


Or, ya know, you could point him in a helpful direction. I'll just PM them.


Pretty bad when you can't recognise Sarcasm 101.


Na, just pretty bad when you aren't open to it being honest.
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you're so rude Duk, you made Symmetry quit the site.
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Does he get a General Contribution medal for that?

Also where is the General Contribution medal that I certainly deserve by now.
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nietzsche wrote:the essay format is pretty rigid, it really sucks..

kind of like the format of the OP here..

you basically search for some sensationalist article and then come to CC, in the Subject you just copy the title of the article, in the body you post the url to the article and the first paragraph.



and then you think you're having conversations with other people.



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