Stopper wrote:Haikus are rubbish,
I'd be a lot more impressed
By a villanelle.
Excuse me for this
So-blatant self-promotion.
'Twas rather hard work.
It looks really neat.
But bloody hard, I do think.
Later I'll write one.
Who can make the best haiku????????
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I wrote one of those
Did a damn good job I'd say
But it was quite hard
As for another
I think I will pass this time
19 lines? Too much.
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Syzygy wrote:It looks really neat.
But bloody hard, I do think.
Later I'll write one.
Please do. Mine was poo.
Backglass did a better one,
Others sure could, too.
My only excuse
For my rubbish poetry
Is it's in my blood.
As I'm from Dundee
William McGonagall's
Ghost lives on in me.
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Stopper wrote:Syzygy wrote:It looks really neat.
But bloody hard, I do think.
Later I'll write one.
Please do. Mine was poo.
Backglass did a better one,
Others sure could, too.
My only excuse
For my rubbish poetry
Is it's in my blood.
As I'm from Dundee
William McGonagall's
Ghost lives on in me.
I tried, oh I tried.
But my brain... Lo! It is fried.
As I said, later.
....
... A fog leaps into an ancient pond.
... The sound of water.
... (That's the official English translation of what is considered the greatest haiku ever written, Matsuo Basho, 17th Century, during his travels into the northern lands of Hokkaido).
... Translations disregard syllabic count, as Japanese and English are completely incompatible, as far as "syllables" are concerned (the sound of "n" is one syllable in Japanese).
... Though personally I prefer his Autumn piece...
... A crow alights on a leafless branch
... Fall of an Autumn day.
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... A fog leaps into an ancient pond.
... The sound of water.
... (That's the official English translation of what is considered the greatest haiku ever written, Matsuo Basho, 17th Century, during his travels into the northern lands of Hokkaido).
... Translations disregard syllabic count, as Japanese and English are completely incompatible, as far as "syllables" are concerned (the sound of "n" is one syllable in Japanese).
... Though personally I prefer his Autumn piece...
... A crow alights on a leafless branch
... Fall of an Autumn day.
...
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Nobunaga wrote:....
... A fog leaps into an ancient pond.
... The sound of water.
... (That's the official English translation of what is considered the greatest haiku ever written, Matsuo Basho, 17th Century, during his travels into the northern lands of Hokkaido).
... Translations disregard syllabic count, as Japanese and English are completely incompatible, as far as "syllables" are concerned (the sound of "n" is one syllable in Japanese).
... Though personally I prefer his Autumn piece...
... A crow alights on a leafless branch
... Fall of an Autumn day.
...
Those blow donkey cock.
Mine are a whole lot better,
they make much more sense.
I was just joking.
Don't get upset about it,
I'm sure those were great.
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