It's been a while since I had a proper look at this map, and it has changed quite a bit from the early idea!
I think the mountains are going to need a bit of work to get them looking right... the links you posted above all look more hand-drawn than the ones on your map. If you can get the style of mountains to look like this I'd be impressed (
http://www.oldmapsbooks.com/WebPictures/2004/oct2004/oct15/oct15california2.JPG) - I think this would be the right look for the map.
Gameplay-wise, I am concerned about Europe and Africa. Auto-deploys and bombardements work on the Berlin map, as those territories are evenly spaced, but here they're all clustered together.
It bothers me that South Africa requires you to defend 7 out of 9 territories. I know you wanted to balance the bottleneck, but I'm not convinced that was the right way to do it.
My random suggestion is to add the 'East of India Tea Company' as an ocean fleet with connections to India, South Africa and Britain.
(You could put an auto-decay on it to represent men lost at sea - the perils of ocean travel!) This way you would eliminate the clustering of autodeploys/bombardments, and open up S Africa a little.