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edbeard wrote:One thing I guess for Wisse to answer. I think I've asked this before, but I can't remember the answer or find it in the thread.

It seems to me that the Chinese Kashmir being able to bombard E. Xizang is a gimmick for gimmick's sake. I can't imagine what type of history would make this type of attack relevant for this map.

yup you or someone else asked this before,
kashmir has a defence status, so i thought it would be nice if you can protect yourself from being attacked (or conquered) from the one way border, its just a little more strategy ;)
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edbeard wrote:well then the only way to get to the north from the southeast would be to go west to the green area


that's probably not a good idea


you forgot the shandong bridge ;)
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if i understand correctly, wm is going to do just a few minor adjustments.
if that's the case then hurry up cause it's been sitting here for ages.

please don't change anything major cause i like the way the map looks.
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Wisse wrote:
edbeard wrote:well then the only way to get to the north from the southeast would be to go west to the green area


that's probably not a good idea


you forgot the shandong bridge ;)


Uhhh. You're looking at the wrong area. I'm talking about the south east area
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good point. let's remove the anhui-jiangxi bridge, but keep the hunan-hubei bridge so that we have only one discontigous continent, nanjing (like extreme global warming's africa). we can remove one of the green bridges instead of the yellow one. which of the green bridges is preferable?

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DiM wrote:if i understand correctly, wm is going to do just a few minor adjustments.
if that's the case then hurry up cause it's been sitting here for ages.

please don't change anything major cause i like the way the map looks.
Correct DiM. I will not be "changing" any of the graphics. If i need to add new mountains, I will use the same stuff as Wisse already made. If I need to move rivers , I will use the style already there.

My goal is to get this done and out for play. ASAP

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WidowMakers wrote:
DiM wrote:if i understand correctly, wm is going to do just a few minor adjustments.
if that's the case then hurry up cause it's been sitting here for ages.

please don't change anything major cause i like the way the map looks.
Correct DiM. I will not be "changing" any of the graphics. If i need to add new mountains, I will use the same stuff as Wisse already made. If I need to move rivers , I will use the style already there.

My goal is to get this done and out for play. ASAP

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3 cheers for you then :D
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OK here are teh updates

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1) Removed Antrui/Jaingxi Bridge
2) put Chinese Kashmir in the bonus table with a bonus of zero
3) To be more geographically correct, can u draw some mountains to make a barrier between Qinghai and Sichuan
4) remove the Yunnan-Guangxi border. Move the border of Guizhou-Guangxi south to cover the difference.
5) perhaps put some impassable mountains between sichuan and hubei, so that green and yellow are not always thinking about attacking each other; in real life, these are the gorge mountains (wu shan), close to the famous three gorges
6) Change the yellow river to follow its real path west, north and east of shaanxi, then remove the river south of shaanxi. build a bridge to link gansu with shaanxi, so that shaanxi is not separated from the other red territories.

SO NOW
Many borders have changed and teh bonuses might need to be adjusted.
-Shaanxi now has 3 more borders (Hena, Hubie and Sichuan)
-Nanjing bonus group is now in 2 parts and the bonus was increase to 5
-Chengdu bonus group now has 2 borders instead of three

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EDIT: Need to redo Wisse Sig and get rid of Link

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one more thing. kasmir has black/white stripes in the legend but on the map it has black/gray strips. make the the same.
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nicely done WM :D i like the new changes,
but i don't like the glow at the arrows (if others like them more keep them ;) )
also remove the bridge from shaanxi to shanxi ;) and if possible (i think it is) put the wall layer above the river layer
and make the black c.kashmir in the legend a bit less dark
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Wisse wrote:nicely done WM :D i like the new changes,
but i don't like the glow at the arrows (if others like them more keep them ;) )
also remove the bridge from shaanxi to shanxi ;) and if possible (i think it is) put the wall layer above the river layer
and make the black c.kashmir in the legend a bit less dark
NP. I will make these changes asap.

Now remember with all of these changes he bonuses will most likely be different. We will need some rework of those possibly.

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i like the glow :wink:
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Unit_2 wrote:i like the glow :wink:
Justo let everyone know. I added the glow because the arrows were hard to see. I actually missed one of them until I started moving layers around.

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I think that Chinese Kashmir on the legend can be just grey. It's damn near impossible to read stripped like that...
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OK here is version 3.

Edits:
    1) Removed glow from arrows
    2) remove the bridge from shaanxi to shanxi
    3) Make c.kashmir legend and territory the same shades of gray (stripes)
    4) Make all c.kashmir text teh same color
    5) Remove stripes from c.kashmir text in legend
    6) Changed Wisse Sig to show Wisse '08 instead of copyrighted Nintendo Link figure.


If this is all good than we need bonus recalcs and I will start on setting up the small map.

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nice wm :)
but i liked kashmir more when it was dark, maybe make them both dark ;)
and the text "chinese kashmir" does look much brighter on the map then in the legend, darken it a bit (not to much ;) or you can make it the same colour as the other country names)

my name is good, but could you move it to where it was? it now seems irritating to look at because there is blue sea behind it

the only bonus that needs to be changed is chengdu (to 2) since you already changed nanjing ;)


it looks great :D
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Wisse wrote:nice wm :)
but i liked kashmir more when it was dark, maybe make them both dark ;)
and the text "chinese kashmir" does look much brighter on the map then in the legend, darken it a bit (not to much ;) or you can make it the same colour as the other country names)

my name is good, but could you move it to where it was? it now seems irritating to look at because there is blue sea behind it

the only bonus that needs to be changed is chengdu (to 2) since you already changed nanjing ;)


it looks great :D
Well I am off to work now. I will make the changes to night and post. If there are no other points of discussion I will do the small map as well.

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WidowMakers wrote:4) remove the Yunnan-Guangxi border. Move the border of Guizhou-Guangxi south to cover the difference.


this has made guizhou a strange shape. try restoring yunnan and guizhou to their original shapes, then putting mountains between yunnan and guangxi (it does happen to be a mountainous area). this means each province will be its proper shape, while having the same effect on gameplay.

the yellow river looks much better now!

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Bonus calc needed? onbekende is here

I get (will adjust to gameplay)

Lanzhou: 5 terr, 3 def, 4 att, 5 cont => Bonus of 4 (3 is indeed more then well, tales only 2 to hold green/red)
Shenyang: 3 terr, 3 def/att, 2 cont => Bonus of 3 (side continent, debatable weither 3 or 2, I say 2 thou)
Guangzhou: 5 terr, 4 def/att, 4 cont => Bonus of 4 (good enough, Hubei will be the site for many battles)
Nanjing: 6 terr, 4 def/att, 2 cont => Bonus of 4 (Indeed better 4, 4 terr need defending for the bonus, and you already get 1 army for Jiangsu!)
Beijing: 3 terr, 2 att/def, 2 cont => Bonus of 2 (good)
Chengdu: 4 terr, 3 def/att, 2 cont => Bonus of 3 (3 is the absolute max, green/red is easely controlled continent block)
Jinan: 2 terr, 2 def/att, 5 cont => Bonus of 3 (perhaps a 2 for the troubles of keeping those 2 terr in the middle of it all?)
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Well I did not get around to doing the small map but here is the fixed Version 4 Large

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-Move Wisse Sig to original position
-Adjusted bonuses (onbekende)
-restore yunnan and guizhou to their original shapes, then putting mountains between yunnan and guangxi
-i liked kashmir more when it was dark, maybe make them both dark
-you can make text "chinese kashmir" the same colour as the other country names

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onbekende, i don't agree with the bonus of 2 for jinan, i agree its not easy to defend but then it only has 2 countries and i made some sort of formula in my head wich is praticaly about the same as yours but then that a bonus can not be even or more then the total of countries held, why? because then the bonus is to overpowered, you only got to defend 2 countries and as bonus you can deploy 1 army on every country each turn, then it will be more a game on who gets jinan first and keeps it
so change jinan back ;) all other things are good WM ;)
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read my extra comments behind the calculated bonus, I said 2 (I just give the calculated one as it actually shows pretty good howmuch you get if its on any map)
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onbekende wrote:read my extra comments behind the calculated bonus, I said 2 (I just give the calculated one as it actually shows pretty good howmuch you get if its on any map)

eum i don't get what you are saying now (yes i did get what you did say near the formula), i just said that a 2 bonus for a 2 country continent is to much
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OK Version 5

I changes the bonus for Jinan back to 1

If these are OK. The XML can get reworked (I moved several circles) and QUENCH. Great Job Wisse.

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Wisse wrote:
onbekende wrote:read my extra comments behind the calculated bonus, I said 2 (I just give the calculated one as it actually shows pretty good howmuch you get if its on any map)

eum i don't get what you are saying now (yes i did get what you did say near the formula), i just said that a 2 bonus for a 2 country continent is to much
I said this:
Jinan: 2 terr, 2 def/att, 5 cont => Bonus of 3 (perhaps a 2 for the troubles of keeping those 2 terr in the middle of it all?)


note the bolded part, never said +2 was bad
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