I love the holiday cheer around here. lackattack, even though you probably won't read this due to your busy schedule, kudos to you, and I hope you share this Valentine's Day with your lovely wife instead of us CC geeks Now take a load off and relax! It's Valentine's Day on CUTESYCLUB!!!
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I love the holiday cheer around here. lackattack, even though you probably won't read this due to your busy schedule, kudos to you, and I hope you share this Valentine's Day with your lovely wife instead of us CC geeks Now take a load off and relax! It's Valentine's Day on CUTSEYCLUB!!!
Nice fail on the spelling of Cutesy
Game 1675072 2018-08-09 16:02:06 - Mageplunka69: its jamaica map and TFO that keep me on this site
I love the holiday cheer around here. lackattack, even though you probably won't read this due to your busy schedule, kudos to you, and I hope you share this Valentine's Day with your lovely wife instead of us CC geeks Now take a load off and relax! It's Valentine's Day on CUTSEYCLUB!!!
samuelc812 wrote:Here is an example by our very own AndyDufresne:[/b]
"Shall I compare thee Conquer Club to a Summer's day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate Save when your dice ruin my play, Like rough winds seemingly shaking my every fate..." -- Andy
Andy, this is grammatically incorrect. Thee and thou were originally used as singular pronouns, while you was used as plural, or signifying respect, eg. when addressing your superiors.
Therefore, when you start with "thee" and "thou" in the first and second lines, you can't switch to "your" on the third line, it should be "thy".
samuelc812 wrote:Here is an example by our very own AndyDufresne:
"Shall I compare thee Conquer Club to a Summer's day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate Save when your dice ruin my play, Like rough winds seemingly shaking my every fate..." -- Andy
Andy, this is grammatically incorrect. Thee and thou were originally used as singular pronouns, while you was used as plural, or signifying respect, eg. when addressing your superiors.
Therefore, when you start with "thee" and "thou" in the first and second lines, you can't switch to "your" on the third line, it should be "thy".
but since the dice are plural isn't your the possessive plural of dice correct?
samuelc812 wrote:Here is an example by our very own AndyDufresne:[/b]
"Shall I compare thee Conquer Club to a Summer's day? Thou art more lovely and more temperate Save when your dice ruin my play, Like rough winds seemingly shaking my every fate..." -- Andy
Andy, this is grammatically incorrect. Thee and thou were originally used as singular pronouns, while you was used as plural, or signifying respect, eg. when addressing your superiors.
Therefore, when you start with "thee" and "thou" in the first and second lines, you can't switch to "your" on the third line, it should be "thy".
I didn't say it was a perfect example. By all means, attempt the contest and show everyone your creative might.
On an on-topic note, I was working on my poem today during my conference period, and a kid stopped in to get help with math and he saw my poem! Needless to say, I was rather embarrassed...
Most feared is the Farmer that Conquers. Cooks innocent Noobs into Zonkers. Screaming and yellow, They writhe and they bellow, "Your dice are driving us bonkers!"