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[static_ice]

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[DaGip]

I like Werewolves...can you put a Werewolf scene in this story?

[Iliad]

All done in photoshop, all airbrushed and made from scratch, no photos (except for reference material). The characters are me and my friend, I'm the one without glasses... you should figure it out. Note that this is like a book/movie, what happens here is a story, its not supposed to be whatever we do in real life. You lot in the picture thread should remember some of these.

I started this project almost immediately after school started this year. Some individual pieces have taken as long as 6 weeks, while I've been able to finish the most recent ones in a single week (3 periods of 90 minutes per day )

Please comment on both the artistry and however the "story" strikes you. I'll explain it step by step.





Accidental Noise/Hear


Character 1 (my friend) is sidling along a wall when he accidentally knocks over a mirror and cracks it. It makes a sharp noise in the direction of Character 2 (me). Those are his feet in the reflection of the mirror and he is alerted that there is another presence in The Building.




Checking the Coast


Character 1 realizes that Character 2 is after him, but he doesn't know where I am. He quickly picks a random door in desperation, but makes sure I'm not behind it first.




Predator/Peeking Eye


Character 2, in the hunt for Character 1, looks through a random door, and what luck, there he is! But he doesn't strike yet, like a wise predator he watches and waits. (Reflection in pupil)




Opening the Door/Sounds Safe


There is a sudden silence and Character 2 believes The Danger has passed. He decides to go back into the previous room (where it all began).
These were my first serious attempts ever, noticeably.




Behind My Back/Evened Out


While Character 2 was hiding in the other room, Character 1 decides he wants to investigate the source of the original noise. he finds the dirty cracked mirror and places it back on the wall. Just in time for Character 2 to open the door behind Character 1 and rediscover The Danger.



I realize there are some noticeable "gaffs" with the architecture and lighting, just bear it please.

Parts 11 and 12 to come soon, possibly over winter break and no later than January 31st. Don't worry it all has a point. So is anyone left in suspense?

Wow cool in the picture with the hand opening the door I think you overdid the hair but that's jsut my opinion

[DaGip]

The hair on the arm looks like iron filings...imagine those hairs becoming longer, and the fingernails becoming sharper...and then "AWWWOOOO!" The guy turns into a blood ravishing Werewolf and rips the other guys head off! That would rock!

The eye with the reflection in it, is my fav. I like the blood vessels you got going on there!

Now, imagine that eye beginning to turn yellow...and then, "AWOOOO!" The guy turns into a Werewolf!

[Chris7He]

What the f*ck is the danger?

[DaGip]

What the f*ck is the danger?

There is no danger yet, he has to turn into a Werewolf and rip off the other guys head!

[static_ice]

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[static_ice]

thanks DaGip (I think) and Iliad

What the f*ck is the danger?

as I said, it'll be explained in the Two Final Conclusion pieces. However the quite obvious answer for now is Character 2. >_>

[fireedud]

All done in photoshop, all airbrushed and made from scratch, no photos (except for reference material). The characters are me and my friend, I'm the one without glasses... you should figure it out. Note that this is like a book/movie, what happens here is a story, its not supposed to be whatever we do in real life. You lot in the picture thread should remember some of these.

I started this project almost immediately after school started this year. Some individual pieces have taken as long as 6 weeks, while I've been able to finish the most recent ones in a single week (3 periods of 90 minutes per day )

Please comment on both the artistry and however the "story" strikes you. I'll explain it step by step.





Accidental Noise/Hear
[imghttp://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w58/static_ice/Graphic%20Design/senior%20year/AccidentalNoisewm.jpg[/img]
[imghttp://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w58/static_ice/Graphic%20Design/senior%20year/hearfinalwm.jpg[/img]
Character 1 (my friend) is sidling along a wall when he accidentally knocks over a mirror and cracks it. It makes a sharp noise in the direction of Character 2 (me). Those are his feet in the reflection of the mirror and he is alerted that there is another presence in The Building.




Checking the Coast
[imghttp://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w58/static_ice/Graphic%20Design/senior%20year/eyeunderdoorfinalwm-1.jpg[/img]
[imghttp://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w58/static_ice/Graphic%20Design/senior%20year/openingdoorfinalwm.jpg[/img]
Character 1 realizes that Character 2 is after him, but he doesn't know where I am. He quickly picks a random door in desperation, but makes sure I'm not behind it first.




Predator/Peeking Eye
[imghttp://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w58/static_ice/Graphic%20Design/senior%20year/PeekingEye0selfwm-1.jpg[/img]
[imghttp://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w58/static_ice/Graphic%20Design/senior%20year/peekingeyeWM-1.jpg[/img]
Character 2, in the hunt for Character 1, looks through a random door, and what luck, there he is! But he doesn't strike yet, like a wise predator he watches and waits. (Reflection in pupil)




Opening the Door/Sounds Safe
[imghttp://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w58/static_ice/Graphic%20Design/senior%20year/hyperdanwatermarkedalt.jpg[/img]
[imghttp://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w58/static_ice/Graphic%20Design/senior%20year/hyperdan4handFINALwatermarked.jpg[/img]
There is a sudden silence and Character 2 believes The Danger has passed. He decides to go back into the previous room (where it all began).
These were my first serious attempts ever, noticeably.




Behind My Back/Evened Out
[imghttp://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w58/static_ice/Graphic%20Design/senior%20year/hyperselfFINAL1WM.jpg[/img]
[imghttp://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w58/static_ice/Graphic%20Design/senior%20year/hyperselfFINAL2WM-1.jpg[/img]
While Character 2 was hiding in the other room, Character 1 decides he wants to investigate the source of the original noise. he finds the dirty cracked mirror and places it back on the wall. Just in time for Character 2 to open the door behind Character 1 and rediscover The Danger.



I realize there are some noticeable "gaffs" with the architecture and lighting, just bear it please.

Parts 11 and 12 to come soon, possibly over winter break and no later than January 31st. Don't worry it all has a point. So is anyone left in suspense?

Wow cool in the picture with the hand opening the door I think you overdid the hair but that's jsut my opinion

Can you not quote posts with big pics?

[static_ice]

just one bump.

[Skittles!]

I only just noticed this.

Looking good Dan :] as usual.

[bloknayrb]

I think the sideways view in the picture with the guy looking through the slightly open door shouldn't be sideways... I know you were going for dramatic perspective, but sideways just feels wrong, maybe try slanted?

[unriggable]

You should shorten your signature to just three hexagons. That could be awesome.

[static_ice]

Thanks Reed

I think the sideways view in the picture with the guy looking through the slightly open door shouldn't be sideways... I know you were going for dramatic perspective, but sideways just feels wrong, maybe try slanted?

He's not looking through a slightly open door, he's looking under a door.

You should shorten your signature to just three hexagons. That could be awesome.

like this? shadow or no shadow? Text or just the hexagons?

[bloknayrb]

Thanks Reed

I think the sideways view in the picture with the guy looking through the slightly open door shouldn't be sideways... I know you were going for dramatic perspective, but sideways just feels wrong, maybe try slanted?

He's not looking through a slightly open door, he's looking under a door.

You should shorten your signature to just three hexagons. That could be awesome.

like this? shadow or no shadow? Text or just the hexagons?

Ah, that wasn't so clear in the image then... Maybe something as a reference for alignment, such as some small objects or something? Or maybe make the floor look more beat up, more like a floor than a wall on the floor

[Tisha]

very cool..

...and it does look like he is looking underneath the door...his hair laying on the floor

[bloknayrb]

very cool..

...and it does look like he is looking underneath the door...his hair laying on the floor

I did notice that, but it didn't jump out at me right away. I think that making the floor a bit more grungy than the walls would be a clearer indication of the angle. But I could be wrong :shrug:

[btownmeggy]

You have improved SO MUCH since you first starting posting your work.

Great job!

[diddle]

This is the first time I've looked into this thread. I've always thought it, but never said it, Static, your bloody good.

[static_ice]

Thanks so much guys




bloknayrb,

A) I'm too lazy.

B) I want to keep moving forward to show the progression and, as meggy described, contrast between my oldest and my latest... i.e. I don't want to be updating all of my old pieces every time I learn a new trick (that specific one is maybe a month or so old).

[bloknayrb]

Thanks so much guys




bloknayrb,

A) I'm too lazy.

B) I want to keep moving forward to show the progression and, as meggy described, contrast between my oldest and my latest... i.e. I don't want to be updating all of my old pieces every time I learn a new trick (that specific one is maybe a month or so old).

Oh, then by all means carry on. In that case, there's really no crits at all, I hate trying to go back and fix old stuff of mine