Since Llama would approve, and I have a bit of time, let's see how long THIS takes. This is my "fix" of ALL or most of the errors made by ConfSS:
Don Lemon, of CNN, wants Americans who are not vaccinated to be shamed and left behind, and to punish those who are not vaccinated. if the[y] don't bow before him, Biden will not send COVID money relief to Red States, but only to Blue States.
Comedian Sarah Silverman wants the Red States and The Blue States to form Vaccinated States and Non-Vaccinated states. This rift will be based on he right to chose what is best for the individual and for each state. She wants the Country to break up into 2 or 3 countries, America #1, America #2, and America #3 etc. [NOT needed, since Silverman already said it: She is on board]. Hey, History repeats itself. This vaccine status, and States Rights is bringing the SOUTH closer to rising again. This new country of American States will have Americans living their lives without mass Government control. [ConfSS does not say which America, but I assume that this will be whatever the Red States are called. I am also confused as to why there will be THREE states since the split is between pro- and anti-vax. What is #3, NEUTRALS??]
Meanwhile, soon. in the other states, Total Government Control, will mean having to get permission from the Government to wipe your ass. Shaming [the] Non-Vaccinated. But remember when it was taboo to shame and exclude people with HIV/AIDS. I guess Don Lemon and others, in the Left Led Media, have forgotten that.
YES, as expected: such efforts is NOT worth my time. That took some 12 minutes.
To honest, such a post looks too boring and bland and SOOO UN-ConfSS. WoW.....!!! LoL
Where did ALL the RED lines GO..???
ConfSS, the COMMA goes immediately AFTER the word, not in front of the NEXT word. You made that error nearly CONSISTENTLY. As that wise guy Symmetry would have NOTED, the use of all those dots (called ellipses, btw) is NOT needed THAT often. Why use ALL those periods when only one will suffice........?????? I wonder.........
As I already stated, I can understand ConfSS; his style is not that complex, perplexing, nor confusing. Most of his basic premises are rather clear, at least to me; however, his grammar is atrocious. I guess a career of reading what my students wrote has trained me well for interpreting ConfSS's Southern accent.
How should ellipses be used?
When words are omitted from within two nearby sentences, insert the ellipsis in place of the omitted words.
Quotation with an ellipsis taking the place of omitted words within nearby sentences:
“With her eyes on her phone . . . [Harden] lost control of the vehicle, and it slammed into a parked car and then a rock wall” (Weir 1). [1]
Note: Spaces are placed between the dots, as well as before and after them.
https://writingcommons.org/article/review-ellipis-usage/Even James Joyce, one of the Masters of Stream-of-Conscious technique, did not use ellipses, as far as I know.
Although the main strength of Ulysses lies in its depth of character portrayal and its breadth of humour, the book is most famous for its use of a variant of the interior monologue known as the stream-of-consciousness technique. Joyce thereby sought to replicate the ways in which thought is often seemingly random and to illustrate that there is no possibility of a clear and straight way through life. By doing so, he opened up a whole new way of writing fiction that recognized that the moral rules by which we might try to govern our lives are constantly at the mercy of accident and chance encounter, as well as the byroads of the mind.
https://www.britannica.com/topic/Ulysses-novel-by-JoyceBastante para ahora. Noch 14 Minuten
ConfederateSS.out!(The Blue and Silver Rebellion)... 
