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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby Phatscotty on Sat Jan 16, 2016 5:15 am

KoolBak wrote:Enjoyed that....nicely written....coming from a guy with a reading problem :lol: Read at least 2 books a week (ususally more) for over 40 years.....and only found a couple Englishy words that threw me! lol

What I would like is a synopsis of the story like one would find on the back cover / inside flap. Can't really tell what the venue is....time, place, etc....

Thanks Jonesy....you deserve much credit =D>


wow! That's an awful lot of reading, and maybe you could offer a great opinion on a couple of the best books you've read in your experience if you don't mind me asking, besides Jonesy's which Iwill probably gander at. And did you ever get into the earth chronicles by Zackariah Stiltchin, or Hamlet/s Mill from the 60's, maybe chariots of the Gods?
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Mon Jan 18, 2016 12:01 pm

Ok, well I believe I now have chaps 1-9 in the right order available to everyone, possibly with a couple of font or format blips, here:

https://wordpress.com/page/thedragonsrun.wordpress.com/4
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Wed Jan 20, 2016 1:42 pm

I'veadded chapter ten onto the end (same link).
That breaks the 100 page barrier.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Thu Jan 21, 2016 12:55 pm

...and chapter eleven. same link, all in one piece and in the right order.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Fri Jan 22, 2016 12:16 pm

So this now takes you to the first thirteen chapters...
https://thedragonsrun.wordpress.com/chapter-one/
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Sat Jan 23, 2016 12:32 pm

Make that fourteen. There'll be a bit of a pause soon, we'realmost at the end of the bit that's stored as data. The rest is only on paper.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Sat Jan 23, 2016 4:48 pm

I'm snowed in. Chapter 15 is up.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Sun Jan 24, 2016 12:24 pm

...and 16, which takes it up to about 160 pages.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Wed Jan 27, 2016 3:22 pm

Chapters 17and 18 are up, which is all you'll get for a little while - the rest doesn't seem to be stored as data, unless it's on another stick. I may have to retype it from a printed version. It ends at a bit of a cliff-hanger, of sorts.

just to remind you, here's where to find chapters 1-18, in the right order.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Tue Mar 29, 2016 3:42 pm

Finally found the rest of the novel, though only on paper, so it's gonna take a while to transcribe, edit, whatever.
Anyhow, the next (short, but vital) chapter is now on the end of the previous stuff.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Thu Apr 07, 2016 9:24 pm

Well, I've read the rest of the story into my computer with an OCR program, but this bit obviously hadn't been fine-tuned as much as the stuff that was on the computer, so it's being edited as and when I have time. Anyhow, Chapter Twenty-One is now up. COnce thewhole thing is complete I shall probably take it off wordpress and set it up as a publish-on-demand. I'm looking onto how to do that now. So if you want to read it free, the time is now.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Thu Apr 07, 2016 11:02 pm

...and after a little flurry of work, yet another chapter is up. I've realized I need to do a final final edit once I've put the whole thing up, mainly as a continuity check - character's names have changed, events which are referred to as having occurred might have been edited out, etc.Still and all, after many years, the end is actually in sight. We;re up to about 65000 words at the wordpress site so far.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Wed Apr 13, 2016 8:34 pm

...and another chapter is up. A rather sad one this, I'm afraid.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby Symmetry on Wed Apr 13, 2016 9:26 pm

jonesthecurl wrote:Well, I've read the rest of the story into my computer with an OCR program, but this bit obviously hadn't been fine-tuned as much as the stuff that was on the computer, so it's being edited as and when I have time. Anyhow, Chapter Twenty-One is now up. COnce thewhole thing is complete I shall probably take it off wordpress and set it up as a publish-on-demand. I'm looking onto how to do that now. So if you want to read it free, the time is now.


Have you published anything before? I ask because it might be a good idea to condense some chapters into a short story, or set of short stories, and contact a journal.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Thu Apr 14, 2016 1:16 am

This is the first novel. I've published two plays and a roleplay game before though. Oh,and a poem once (in a very obscure place).
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Thu Apr 14, 2016 6:48 pm

Have you read it, Symm? know you read an awful lot like me, I'd value your opinion.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Fri Apr 22, 2016 3:18 pm

...and another chapter is up. unless something drastic happens to my creative impulses, there's five more.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby apey on Fri Apr 22, 2016 4:18 pm

If you promise not to leave me hangin ill read it jonsey
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Fri Apr 22, 2016 6:38 pm

Promise.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Fri Apr 22, 2016 8:31 pm

jonesthecurl wrote:Promise.


I never leave a lady hanging.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Tue Apr 26, 2016 2:10 am

...and chapter 26 is up, about another 3-4000 words. This chapter needed more editing than most, the ideas were there but it felt as if I'd rushed it the first time around.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby Symmetry on Tue Apr 26, 2016 8:04 pm

jonesthecurl wrote:...and chapter 26 is up, about another 3-4000 words. This chapter needed more editing than most, the ideas were there but it felt as if I'd rushed it the first time around.


How much more to go? I like to read in large blocks, so should I wait for a few more? Not that 3-4000 words is anything to sniff at, mind.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Wed Apr 27, 2016 11:32 am

There's about three or four more chapters to go. The final chapter is extremely short.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Wed Apr 27, 2016 2:16 pm

Chapter 27 is up, and it has a big fight scene in it.
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Re: a recovered "masterpiece"...

Postby jonesthecurl on Thu Apr 28, 2016 12:20 am

28. Something really bad happens.
I may try to push right on to the end before I go to bed tonight.
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