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		cairnswk wrote:If everyone is happy with this, i will proceed to once again "split" the maps.


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		InkL0sed wrote:Nitpick: the text for "The Julio Claudian Family" is ugly and kind of hard on the eyes. I think maybe you should add a faint stroke to it, also maybe darken the color of the text.



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		ghirrindin wrote:Edit:
At the bottom where you explain "Adoption Paths" you use the word "don't" twice in a row. Looks like a typo.


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			the.killing.44 wrote:Really really nitpicky, but would you capitalize the "L" in "Let all the …" I know it's tiny
And I don't think you even need to wait a week, just a couple days should do it. Split split split!
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		Incandenza wrote:The "adoption path" legend text looks strangely un-bolded compared to neighboring legend bits.



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		The Neon Peon wrote:I think you might want to go over the text on the large map
all of the following have some overlapping letters:
Atia Caesonia
Gaius Octavious
Marcus Antonius
wife (in the legend under Family Unit Bonus)
Vipsania Julia
etc.
Glad to see this in the final forge.



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			the.killing.44 wrote:Two things:
Small
888 completely covers "D" on DrususMove the box left 2px and the name right 1px if needed.
Also, I'm wondering if you could fit "Agrippinella" on one line?
Other than that you're good to go.
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			the.killing.44 wrote:
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			the.killing.44 wrote:I think that's it's still here because of the complexity of the map (more likely for underlying concerns) and the previous ruffle, which although sorted Andy just wants to make sure that everything's great. It's more complicated than the others, but I'm sure it'll be quenched in no time
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			the.killing.44 wrote:Hey, personally I woulda quenched it. I was just saying, that's most likely to be Andy's concern …
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