As a fellow writer, I applaud the fact that you posted this here. The denizens of social lounge are a somewhat scurvy lot...
That being said, you have a bit of a problem with your book as presently constituted. I get the impression you're going for a kung-fu/martial arts/whatever type of thing, but it's almost exclusively a visual genre, whether we're talking movies or comic books.
You might, in fact, be better off trying to adapt it to a comic, then get someone (perhaps yourself) to handle the drawing, then try and either self-publish or get one of the lower-tier companies like Slave Labor to take a look at it.
Just my $ .02....